Communism Exhibit
Welcome to the Industrial Revolution rise of communism exhibit. In this exhibit we have photographs of Karl Marx, his family and his friend Friedrich Engels. Communism is a form of government thought up by Karl Marx and Friedrich Engels. Communism supports the elimination of private property creating a classless and stateless society. Everyone is equal; their house and health service is covered by the government. Everything is owned by the people through the government.
Communism has affected the way people think about politics and the government. Karl Marx criticized capitalism because he thought that it was making the rich man richer and the poor man poorer. As a solution to this problem he proposed communism.
Look at the photo gallery and see me if you have any questions.
Saturday, September 29, 2007
Posted by zain at 11:03 PM
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zain,
I like the way you wrote about the main ideas, and didn't get too much into the details. The facts were all correct, I think. Maybe this would've worked for your museum exhibit, but I think a few lines should be changed to make it sound more like a blog post and less like a museum exhibit. For example, at the beginning when you say "Welcome to the Industrial Revolution rise of communism exhibit," you could say something like welcome to my blog post about Karl Marx and communism. Finally, I liked how you could here the voice of the author in the piece!
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